A Personal Narrative, by Rebecca Sullivan July 10, 2014BethMooreSchool 3 Comments Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
I loved the part about dancing a jig with the dog on the last day of school. I could really picture the three of you in my mind. As for Penny, I’m glad she’s going to be okay. How scary! Reply
I loved your use of font size and style to develop the tone of the story! As a dog owner, I totally empathize with what you went thorough, great story! Reply
I could feel the joy of the last day with the way you wrote and then I felt the fear for your dog! Wonderful writing. Thankful Penny is okay! Reply
Summer Writing 2014 
I loved the part about dancing a jig with the dog on the last day of school. I could really picture the three of you in my mind.
As for Penny, I’m glad she’s going to be okay. How scary!
I loved your use of font size and style to develop the tone of the story! As a dog owner, I totally empathize with what you went thorough, great story!
I could feel the joy of the last day with the way you wrote and then I felt the fear for your dog! Wonderful writing. Thankful Penny is okay!